Watered down writing
Thursday, October 2nd, 2008I recently reviewed a manuscript by a fellow who has some very good thoughts on our energy problem. But it’s boooooring!
What happened?
He let his “backers” water it down to pabulum. It seems they have an agenda that doesn’t fit with what he discovered in his research, so they kept after him to “tone it down”. When he finished, it still didn’t fit all of their pre-conceived notions, so they dropped him and his project. (more…)