Posts Tagged ‘descriptions’

What to Add in Drafts to Make Your Story Sell Better

Tuesday, July 27th, 2010

by Victory Crayne

Ah, that sweet spot when you’ve completed the first draft of a new story. In your excitement, you may want to show others your creation. After all, if you had so much fun writing it, it MUST be good, right?

Hold it right there!

First drafts can always use some revisions and, in some cases, SERIOUS rewriting. You wouldn’t want people to read your half-baked draft and think that it is your BEST work, would you? (more…)

Write It Tight

Tuesday, September 29th, 2009

by John Bowers

It takes a really good query to get a publisher’s (or agent’s) attention, but what really sells your book is the book itself.  The query might be a masterpiece, but if the novel isn’t at least as good, you’re going to be rejected.

Agents and publishers are inundated with material, most of it bad.  If you’re going to rise above the mob, your book has to have something special.  A compelling, well-plotted story is obviously necessary, but it’s amazing how many well conceived stories are just plain badly written. To sell your story, it needs to be written well, and the best way to do that is to write it tightly.

Tight writing, like tight pants, gets noticed. (more…)